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Halloween Writing Contest 2026 | Winning Stories

English Scholar Writing Centre · Halloween Narrative Contest 2026

Congratulations to all our young writers who submitted imaginative, suspenseful, and original Halloween stories this year. We are proud of the creativity, courage, and developing craft shown by every participant.

First Place · Knock Knock

By Mathew Xu

Mathew’s story turns a familiar Halloween visit into an increasingly frightening mystery. Each knock raises the stakes, especially as the narrator fights to protect his younger sister. The strong momentum and a final chilling reversal make this our first-place selection.

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Second Place · Penny

By Jessie Zhang

Jessie’s story builds a haunting world around the mysterious town of Roseville, a porcelain doll, and a history of disappearances. Its vivid atmosphere, recurring visual clues, and cyclical ending make it an exceptional second-place entry.

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From the Editors

Both winning stories show that compelling horror depends on more than a frightening image. It depends on suspense, thoughtful details, and making readers care what happens next. Knock Knock distinguishes itself with its pacing, immediate stakes, and sharp ending; Penny shines through its atmospheric setting and intricately connected clues. We congratulate both writers and every student who entered.

About Nelli

Nelli Warren | English Instructor
Ms. Nelli Warren is an accomplished educator and English tutor who helps Tri Cities and Fraser Valley high school students (including those in Surrey, Langley, Coquitlam and Port Coquitlam) get better marks in the classroom and succeed on the BC Provincial English Exam.

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TESTIMONIALS

“The classes I have attended have been eye-opening and truly knowledgeable. I have applied the techniques taught at the English Scholar Writing Centre to my English class and the results have been superb: I am sitting at an “A” (93%).” ~Albert Lee, Grade 11 Fraser Heights Secondary

“After attending the English Scholar Writing Centre for just a short while, my daughter has made remarkable improvements in her writing. Although she constantly had trouble with clarity in the past, she now writes insightful and precise essays. I am so impressed when I read her work and I am so proud that she is currently getting 94% in her English class. Her improvement is astounding.” ~Hyunae Cho, Mother of Grade 10 student

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WRITING CLASSES

English Scholar Writing Centre, located in Surrey, BC offers a wide range of classes, both in-class and online, to help high school students master the skills of critical analysis and academic writing and prepare them for the BC English Provincial Exam.

Junior Academic Writing – Grades 8/9
Junior Academic Writing – Grade 10
Senior Academic Writing – Grade 11
Senior Academic Writing – Grade 12
BC English Provincial Exam

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KUDOS TO US

“Nelli not only teaches you how to write, but she also knows how to analyze and connect with literary pieces. I was in ESL in grade 9, but, after attending Nelli’s class, I was moved into regular English class and received 95% in English 12. During grade 12, my essays were always selected as exemplars, which my teacher photocopied to students so they could see what techniques I used. Nelli goes over all types of literature, from articles to novels, and that prepared me well for the Provincial Exam on which I got 91%. The skills I learned from Nelli are definitely helping me write papers later on in my studies.”

~Jennifer Seo Bin Park, 2012 Pinetree Secondary Graduate, McGill University- Life Science and BioMed Program

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